I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hi I'm Ari from Kaingaroa school, I really like that you've put a tour of your very on blog, I was very exited to see this. Next time, add a description, egg WALT and reflection. And move to somewhere else so I can hear dome of the words
That was a very good tour next time go somewhere so its not so loud
ReplyDeleteHi Keira i think that was an AMAZING tour next time you could add a Reflection or WALT.
ReplyDeleteyes go some where thats not loud
ReplyDeleteHi I'm Ari from Kaingaroa school, I really like that you've put a tour of your very on blog, I was very exited to see this. Next time, add a description, egg WALT and reflection. And move to somewhere else so I can hear dome of the words
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